Sunday, 4 November 1990

A Short Story: The Watchers in the Window















The watchers in the window
(A Fable in the Style of T.F. Powys)

In the church of St Martin‑in‑the‑Field at Little Madder, three figures kept their silent vigil in stained glass: St Agnes, holding her lamb as though it were a secret, St Martin, mid‑gesture with his cloak and 
a small round‑cheeked angel, painted with such innocence that the villagers called her Little Blessing.

They had watched vicars come and go for centuries, and they knew the moods of the parish better than any living soul.

When the new vicar arrived, the Reverend Crispin Hale, tall, brisk, and bright‑eyed, the window‑figures leaned into their coloured stillness and observed him with the wary interest of creatures who have seen too much to be easily impressed.

“He walks like a man who fears being overtaken by his own shadow,” murmured St Agnes.

Little Blessing nodded, for she sensed the same.

The first unsettling

The first change came at Harvest Thanksgiving. Little Madder had always offered rustic seasonal prayers,  old words shaped by plough and weather, spoken in the slow cadence of the soil. But Reverend Hale declared them “out of date” and replaced them with tidy, clipped sentences that sounded as though they had been written in a room with no windows.

The villagers obeyed, though uneasily. 

In the window, St Martin whispered, “He has cut the cord between the land and the altar. The earth will notice.”
 
The brightening of the holy night

At All Souls, the church was lit as fiercely as a dairy at milking time. The villagers, accustomed to the soft half‑dark where candles glowed like patient spirits, blinked under the glare. Their candles flickered weakly, unable to compete with the electric blaze.

“The dead do not care for such brightness,” said Little Blessing. “They prefer the shadows where memory breathes.”

St Agnes sighed, for she remembered gentler nights.
 
The gardener’s quiet departure

Old Mr. Lark, who had tended the churchyard for forty years and prepared daffodils for Mothering Sunday, was told his services were no longer required. He left without complaint, though the daffodils that spring bloomed in confused clumps, as though they missed the hand that once coaxed them into beauty.

“A man who knows the soil is worth ten who know the rules,” St Martin muttered.

The unbowed altar

The villagers soon noticed that Reverend Hale never bowed before the altar. He blessed them with words alone, his hands stiff at his sides, as though gesture might betray him. The window‑figures watched this with growing concern.

“A man who will not bend,” said St Agnes, “will soon expect others to bend for him.”
 
The closed Vicarage

The final sign came when the villagers realised that Reverend Hale never invited anyone into the Vicarage. “It is my home,” he said firmly, and so all meetings were held in a cold room in the church hall, where the stackable chairs stood like mute witnesses.

Some parishioners drifted away to the Methodist chapel, where the minister still bowed before the altar and still welcomed folk into his kitchen for tea.

The window’s verdict

One evening, as dusk settled purple over the yews, the stained‑glass watchers held their quiet council.

“He has made the church bright,” said Little Blessing, “but brightness is not the same as light.”
 
“He has tidied the worship,” said St Agnes, “but tidiness is not the same as holiness.”
 
“He has closed his house,” said St Martin, “and a closed house makes a closed heart.”

The watchers in the window were seeing what the villagers were only beginning to understand, that a church can lose its soul not through wickedness, but through a brightness that leaves no room for the shadows where grace likes to dwell.